First Draft

Falcon And Sunshine Save The City.

One Early morning in the town of Awesomeness, a boy called Falcon was in an abandoned warehouse. This usually wasn’t his type of thing, he wouldn’t have done it if his friends hadn’t given him $50. Falcon was 15. He was a normal teenager- you know the one that walks down your street complaining about anything. The one that’s hair is messed up and the clothes scraggy? You know the one??

So on this cold and vile morning, Falcon was in the worn down warehouse. It was rusted and creaky. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw and orange goo. And as any dumb teenager would do he put his hands in it. The goo travelled up his arms and created another layer of skin. It was like a caterpillar in a cocoon. He was trapped. This goo surrounded him. After 5 minutes the goo released him and fell to the floor. 10 minutes later he woke up. He ran back home and went to bed at 7’0’ clock.

His sister Sunshine was curious what was wrong with Falcon. Sunshine was twelve years old, she had lushes golden hair and her marctial art skill was better than Jackie Chan's.

Sunshine ran up to Falcons room and tried to open his door, she couldn't so she hit it down. "What's up? The past week you've been really moody and gloomy. I've never seen you like this before. What is it?

Falcon went downstairs. They got salt and vinegar potato chips to eat and sat down to watch television and there was nothing on so they started watching the news.

Watching the news on T.V, Sunshine and Falcon sat. Then something occured on the news: " Last night, the mysterious cloaked figure robbed the national bank and not only did he do that but he also revealed his true identity. " On the news the cloaked figure took off his mask. They recognised him as the International Criminal - The green goblin.

Falcon got up and walked out the door. "Hey! Hey wait! Where are you going?!" Exclaimed Sunshine. Falcon walked on. When they reached the warehouse, Falcon pulled open the creaking old rusty door and pointed at the goo. "What?" Said Sunshine. "The goo- put your hands in it" explained Falcon. Hesitatingly, Sunshine did so. The same routine happened. The goo pulled over her skin and it oozed all over her body eventually forming a cocoon. 10 mins later, the goo melted and sagged onto the floor. Falcon and Sunshine were amazed. Sunshine was really flexible. She could stretch right down to the other end of the room. All of a sudden, there was an ear-piercing scream. It was definitely the Green Goblin. They thought they could take down this ugly goblen down. They were so scared but they needed to do this to save their friends and family. They decided to go and face the big ugly goblen and take him down.

They went to where the goblen was and started fight. Green goblen was taller in person they thought. Falcon blew is laser beams and threw his plasma balls. Sunshine kung fooed the him and the worst part was they were fighting on top of the roof. They keep fighting and then Green Goblen threw a pumpkin bomb at Sunshine. She jumped as she landed the piece that she landed on a boarded that was very weak. She tried to get off but it broke and she fell down 100 floors. Sunshine did not survive.

Falcon was devastated, he knew that he had to get revenge on Green Goblin. "It's all my fault! If i hadn't taken her to the warehouse this would have never happened." Falcon started to fight with all his might. People were watching from the bottom of the building. Falcon killed Green Goblin and ran down to see Sunshine. Sunshine was dead. He had given up all hope on everything else when a man came over and given falcon a stone. "What's this for?" Falcon screamed! But the man walked away.

Falcon started to cry. He cried like he never had before. Unaware of this, The tears dropped onto the rock. The rock began to melt. It turned to liquid. The liquid moved over to sunshine and within seconds Sunshine's eyes opened.

"Sunshine! You're alive! How?..." But Falcon was interrupted by the man again. "The rock" Said the man's voice. It was pure. Unlike anything Falcon had ever heard before. The man disappeared out of nowhere. But not everything was done…

The liquid from the rock started bubbling. Suddenly a figure rose up out of the liquid. The figure was short and had a pumpkin mask on. This could only mean one thing. The green goblin was formed out of the figure.

Falcon shot plasma balls and Sunshine hit him with his karate strikes. The green goblin was helpless. Suddenly, the Same man appeared out of nowhere. He shot fire at the Green goblin. The goblin began to melt again.

“I’m melting! I’m melting! I’ll get you bird one day! You and your meddling sister!” The Green Goblin cried out in pain.

The man cleared up the liquid and then burned it. It exploded into tiny little pieces. And then the man disappeared. The crowd surrounding them were gobsmacked. Falcon and Sunshine ran home away from the crowd. Their Mum and Dad were so happy to see them both.

That was enough trouble for one day…